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lethargy of the soul
Contributed by
Torn_Thomas
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Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 02:45:46 AM in AEST
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LostLove
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my heart just can't be bothered
it's took too many blows
the ups and downs have crushed me
and on my face it shows
I smile when i'm prompted
when it's expected of me
but rarely in amusement
and never just from glee
my friends just think i'm grumpy
they'll never know the truth
I'm dead inside and have been
since the turmoil in my youth
my heart just can't be bothered
it's took too many blows
but there's still a sliver of hope
and with each day it grows
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Torn_Thomas
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2007-08-20 02:45:46]
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Re: lethargy of the soul
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 03:30:38 PM AEST
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Thomas,
I loved the title to this. The write was brief, but put together so rhythmically. Sad but with hope at the end. Well done.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: lethargy of the soul
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 11:59:53 PM AEST
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| again, wording is great, flow is great, can totally relate x |
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