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I see now
Contributed by
jackee_line
on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 06:28:26 AM in AEST
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The way I feel right now
is beyond my understanding.
To be able to feel without boundaries
to feel free with no restrictions.
I want to fly to nowhere.
Take away these shackles
that was instill on me for so many years.
Set me free, poison my virgin mind
let me live, let me breath.
For I see now, that this is the only way...
I want to be me as God intented
and not you who hold me back.
For I see now....
~*~
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2007-08-22 06:28:26]
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Re: I see now
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 10:02:14 AM AEST
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this is a lovely write, nice rythm and wording..
well done!!!
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Re: I see now
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 04:24:54 AM AEST
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Sometimes thoughts just fly into your head and you have to get them down onto paper.
You've done this pretty well here.
Good work
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Re: I see now
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 02:01:22 AM AEST
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This is more than good because it is honest,
should we not be this way, we start out as us and somewhere down the road of life we
are impounded by the demands of what
others tell us we should be. Very liberating
peice of writting . . .
Ben
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Re: I see now
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 04:17:29 AM AEST
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Truly a beautiful poem..
Happy Holidays To You & Yours
Blessings..
honey |
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Re: I see now
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:56:13 AM AEST
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WOW! This is marvelous! This is freedom in print. I love this completely. Your word flow is unique and well done and your subject is profoundly poetic! Just as the piece it self is subtle and classy art. It may have been written really fast but the muse certainly guided you.
I believe some make take this line for granted but;
I want to fly to nowhere
Damn that line is boudless and profound, whether it was intended that way or not. To fly to nowhere what a splendid joy that would be. Aimlessly free just going where the wind blows you and doing so in search of the act of searching. I could go on and on about the multiple impacting possible meanings of that line. It is enormous!
SUPERB!
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Re: I see now
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 03:57:19 AM AEST
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| Wow a really nice written write wow wish I could write like that keep using that gift you have keep writing. |
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Re: I see now
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 09:09:04 PM AEST
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| Nice job here. This is a reality write. The best kind if you ask me. |
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