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dead but still suffering
Contributed by
sportychick5434
on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 01:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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what did i do to desirve this
i said i love you
then you lied
i guess you imaged her ...not me
take my life
soo you can take this horrid pain with it
let me suffer...
for i have not made you happy
take me for not loveing you more
not missing you enough...
but the problem is i miss you still... a year later...
i am different
i accepted you for who you are
not for all the mistakes you have made
i am srry i am not the person the person you want me to be
soo have it your way
i will say good bye
for you killed my insides....
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2007-08-22 13:13:24]
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Re: dead but still suffering
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 11:48:13 PM AEST
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i have an idea of what your going through, and it really does suck.
nice write - you portrayed the emotions well, and raw pain makes for great writes.
good job!
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