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Words hold power
Contributed by
nates_jrat
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Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 11:32:24 PM in AEST
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There's a man at the top
staring down at the world
he watches in sorrow
as he stares at his girl
Tears fill those oceans
the sun is a mess
she screams, but to him
it's a whisper at best
The wind strikes his back
and caresses her face
he starts his decent
her heart starts to race
Yet before he can fall
3 words break through
he grabs for the ledge
changed with, "I LOVE YOU"
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Re: Words hold power
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by Jzarmel on
Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 06:22:12 AM AEST
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| Very nicely put |
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Re: Words hold power
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by Myd on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 12:15:54 PM AEST
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lovely nates
sad, but love without sufering would not be love eh?
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Re: Words hold power
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by 2bpositive on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 11:55:22 PM AEST
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Really nice poem.
Keep writing, I want to read more.....
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