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Can you hear the children crying
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 09:00:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Can you hear
the children crying
Day by day
they keep on dying
And still the world
it keeps denying
That all along
its been lying
Can you see
all deaths destruction
A brought about
planned construction
A simple case
of moral deduction
Values lost
through faiths reduction
Can you see
that hope is failing
The whole of man
is now derailing
A soulful cry
of woeful wailing
At all our dreams
away are sailing
Can you hear
your soul a screaming
No my friend
youre not dreaming
The pain inside
your heart is reaming
The hand of fate
is not redeeming
Can you hear
the children crying
Day by day
they keep on dying
And still the world
it keeps denying
That all along
its been lying
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wordsy
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Re: Can you hear the children crying
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 10:27:41 PM AEST
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Good gracious wordsy, this is a powerful, POWERFUL write!
And a damn find one at that. So much wisdom meshed with
sadness and a hopelessness that grips the soul. Damn.
Your words are strong, but hearts are so weak sometimes. This
world leaves me weeping more than it should and wondering
often, why and how the world keeps getting worse. And why
are we letting it?
Exceptional write, friend. Tremendously though provoking.
~Breezy |
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Re: Can you hear the children crying
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by endlesspath on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 10:53:25 PM AEST
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we all do and see what we think others might want us too, thats the problem with the world today. we dont use our own judgement all the time, because it might be the wrong to others or not acceptable. i hate that. people are just getting stranger and stranger as times goes on. such a deep touching write. keep touching all, never stop
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Re: Can you hear the children crying
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 02:55:21 AM AEST
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its so sad and horrible that any child anywhere has to suffer, ever! it floors me with all of our 'technology' this is still happening!
excellent write as always my friend,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Can you hear the children crying
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by thumper on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 08:12:02 AM AEST
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Great R&R and an excellent subject. The world is going to hell in a handbasket. It just gets worse and worse everyday. Great write. Bravo!
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Peace
Thumper :o) |
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Re: Can you hear the children crying
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by justagirl82 on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:56:12 AM AEST
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People, who do nothing to help a corrupt world, are just as weak as those who do the corrupting. All of humanity is at fault. How is good change supposed to occur if no one is willing to fight for justice?
~~~~~~~~~Exceptional write and very thought-provoking~~~~~~~~~
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