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The Failure Of A Language
Contributed by
gilbert92
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Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 04:20:27 PM in AEST
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Sitting on the couch, tapping on his notebook, the measly pages that hold his heart together. With every syllable written, his breath quickens as he loses himself in his language that no one can understand, only he can understand it as the tip of his pen dwindles to the innermost dwellings of his heart. The pen bleeds, turning everything written on paper into disillusions as many things in life have. He looks out at the city street and the incandescent lights surround it , while hes stuck inside with himself, his own worst enemy. He drops his pen and walks away. Leaving an unfinished sentence an untold story.
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Re: The Failure Of A Language
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by Former_Member on
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| I felt a deep feeling of sadness when reading this poem. well expressed and I know the feeling of writers block bern |
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