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I Deserve Better
Contributed by
justagirl82
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Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 01:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Do you ever feel set aside from everyone?
But others put you there instead of yourself.
Do you ever feel like your getting the worse end of the deal?
Like someone around you,
who you feel doesnt deserve the things she gets,
is getting everything and more,
while you stand back with much less.
Do you ever feel like it just doesnt matter anymore?
Like no one really hears you when you speak, even when youre yelling?
You could scream out your lungs and nobody would be listening.
Do you ever want to slap someone to make them pay attention?
To pay attention to whats really going on, your true reality?
Do you ever feel like they try and guilt trip you?
Well, heres a clue; ITS NOT FAIR AND I DONT CARE!
I deserve better.
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Re: I Deserve Better
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 02:37:44 PM AEST
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You have expressed your feelings well here a long with your candor of honesty. Nicely done. May you find the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart.
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Re: I Deserve Better
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:32:01 PM AEST
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| We all think that we deserve better. Perhaps you do, I will cross my fingers that your luck soon changes and you may write a thank you poem, greetings from bern |
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Re: I Deserve Better
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 02:32:19 AM AEST
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your messege on this poem is expressed very well.. sounds like your very frustrated with the people around you.. sometimes we all need to be considered with things but aren't always when we need it.. very well expressed
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I Deserve Better
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by isis1987 on
Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 02:14:26 PM AEST
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| yes i believe we have all been there. i missed out on alot of things growing up, but what *****es me off is people that have can get whatever they want and dont deserve it. oh well what goes around comes around. nice poem. |
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