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Nothing Left
Contributed by
jada
on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 03:44:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What am I to accomplish when I see you?
All the things you said you wanted,but in reality never came true.
When i see you again for the first time, how do i control my emotions and not throw myself at your feet?
Only to realize the planning was just a waste of time, and that Id end up with the emotions of sorrow and defeat.
Id one had enough passion for you that could start a fire.
Who knew it was fueled by lust, greed, jealousy, and desire.
No one ever talks about how and what it takes to move on from the past.
And why and how can i move on from something that could never last?
Why I think on things that I can't change.
I must acceptt that it is over and that I can't go back.
I must face the truth, we have risked what we cannot get back.
there is nothing left of us that we can contain.
there's just nothing left of us that reamains.....
Copyright ©
jada
... [
2007-08-29 15:44:00]
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Re: Nothing Left
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:11:06 PM AEST
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| Nothing wrong with your poetry,remember practise make the master. There are many worse poets on the site. Keep writing and pick some topic that you know something about. Love is good but so are the other things in life. try a poem about your working life for instance. All the best from bern. |
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