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You dont love me-
Contributed by
isis1987
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Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 03:56:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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you take comfort here, lying next to me
but you dont love me
you take love from here, being inside me
but you dont love me
you take happiness from here, sucking it from me
you dont love me
you take pride from here, degrading me
you dont love me
you take everything from here, killing me
no! you dont love me
you leave me broken here, walking away from me
because you dont love me
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2007-08-29 15:56:15]
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Re: You dont love me-
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:06:37 PM AEST
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| By the way you write it is time for the parting of the ways. Give him an ultimatum either things change or you are gone. Love is and never can be one sided. greetings from bern. |
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Re: You dont love me-
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 02:29:23 AM AEST
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this is a very sad write.. if you are still with this person you deserve much better.. sounds like a loser of a person to me.. this touches that subject quite well..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: You dont love me-
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by jada on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 07:55:02 AM AEST
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| hey gurl... i kno exactly what u mean...ok u get the ropes and the duck tape and the guy and leave the rest to me^__^ lol kidding but it was a really good poem! |
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