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This world
Contributed by
zicky
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Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 08:03:33 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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If your heart is a mutilated insect taking all night to die, Well, yknow, keep it to yourself..... If you are numb from the earth up, And the earth crashes down from above, Deal with it. If a humans solitary cry to you is a deafening symphony- from me youll get no sympathy. I dont care. And just because the bloody words rhyme Dont think you can bend my ear- either. This world is the only one we are going to inhabit. Think about that. And be happy.
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Re: This world
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 03:09:33 AM AEST (User
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What a wonder piece of advice that quite a few would be poets on this list should read and take notice of. Top marks from bern. |
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Re: This world
(User Rating: 1 ) by catz77 on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 06:00:32 AM AEST (User
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a lot of people cope with problems by writing them out or talking to someone... they don't expect someone to say ***** off...
i love your first line though |
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