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Thoughts on sadness
Contributed by
wordsy
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Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 09:10:21 PM in AEST
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I have pondered upon thoughts of sadness
in prayer upon my knees.
I have cried up in the hour of darkness
and on deafness fail my pleas.
I have descended the depths so very deep
and found them dark and bare.
And I have gone as bout as far as
one soul surely should dare.
I have sought the truths as yet unknown
that are hidden from my eyes.
A yearning hearts deepest desires
wrapped up in their lies.
I have wondered at the fettered thoughts
of those who would demand.
That we cast away our worried doubts
and leave it to their hand.
I have cried in the congregation,
whose wrath I would incur.
Wondering thoughts of our salvation
whose heart it often stirs.
And the wandering path of devastation
it seems that we are on.
Is put before us as a destination,
Conclusions are now fore drawn.
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2007-08-29 21:10:21]
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Re: Thoughts on sadness
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 09:19:20 PM AEST
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I understand feeling lost. I'm there most of the time. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Re: Thoughts on sadness
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 10:13:22 PM AEST
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Excellent write. You've touched on many feelings I think we all have shared/felt.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Thoughts on sadness
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by Moonshine on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 02:25:15 AM AEST
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| It is easy to relate to this poem. The flow is very good. Nice job. |
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Re: Thoughts on sadness
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 02:27:06 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful expressive write.. everyone who reads this piece can relate to all of this or at least some of this.. this is worded so eloquently ! fabulous!!
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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