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Letter
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 10:34:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Im not surprised that the world hates me
looking back at all my sins
The truth always escaped me
the words I spoke were never mine
The solemn walls Ive built around me
to protect myself form what may come
is the prison that damns me
my greatest demon is myself
All of my dreams lay shattered
I cant seem to piece them back
the storm only gets harder
the rains like a whip on my back
Im not surprised that you hate me
after all the things I said to you
The fights we had wont die
neither will my betrayals
Im not so sure I can live like this
with the words they scream
all I want to do is fall asleep
and never wake up from my dream
I tried to make my life better
I tried to live my lies
and every time I thought I was helping
I was tying another knot in my noose
Im writing this so you know
this was not your fault
my actions are the result of me break
I just cant live like this anymore
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2007-08-29 22:34:05]
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Re: Letter
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 12:37:12 AM AEST
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| The poem is not to my taste but if you are making it into a song then go ahead who knows you might be lucky and have a top hit. Bern |
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Re: Letter
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by Forgotten_soul on
Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 08:35:36 AM AEST
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| I think that's very good, I think the ending isn't as fitting though, might need some work, but that's just me. Also the speeling needs some work. But really, I like it |
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