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Prefect Moment
Contributed by
trisha
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You meet a guy
You quickly become
Attrack to him.
You fall deeply in love
With him every moment
Of every day.
You think about him
Wanting to be with him.
You look at him fall more
In love with him.
All you want is to be with him
To hold in your arms and smile
At him.
He smiled back at you to show.
He cares to feel loved to be happy.
Not to be depressed anymore to
Leave life onces more and just go
Up to him and kiss him.
Feel his breath taken away with a
Pashion kiss under the stars.
You know both ment to
Love each other dear.
Copyright ©
trisha
... [
2003-03-04 11:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Prefect Moment
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:05:57 AM AEST
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| very well written |
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Re: Prefect Moment
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:47:27 AM AEST
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| Attrack in 3rd line.. perhaps a typo.. its allright this poem is good .. venkat |
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Re: Prefect Moment
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:10:39 AM AEST
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cool beans!
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Re: Prefect Moment
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 12:59:22 AM AEST
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great poem. I know how this feels. I know that I am falling in love with my new boyfriend.
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