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When A Lover Dies
Contributed by
OneLastTime
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Monday, 3rd September 2007 @ 01:31:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A car crashes.,
As the violins play.
He cries out for her,
But she can't hear him.
She's dead,
Gone forever.
He will never hold her again,
He'll never kiss her again,
never tell her he loves her.
A year goes by.
It seems like his life is over.
With a final act of desperation,
He takes one last breath,
Runs a knife across his throat,
He bleeds.
It's over for him too.
He's gonna reunite with his love.
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2007-09-03 01:31:04]
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Re: When A Lover Dies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd September 2007 @ 12:29:35 PM AEST
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simple, raw, dark.
i like it.
- Bethani - |
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Re: When A Lover Dies
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:39:33 PM AEST
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| this was a eyeopener for me.. but coming from the aspect that i burried my best friend and lover a few years ago.. i know that there is strength in a heart that wells deeper than we know.. its not love, its so much more knowing that the one you love will be there waiting and not want you to do that act of taking your life.. find an outlet, and live and let them live in you.. |
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