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pack and all just leave?
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 4th September 2007 @ 11:51:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Know now the past is lost and to find the beginning is pointless
The waves have arrived time to set the pieces straight
Our weather unpredicted uproar and fear becomes us
Channelled up stream no fish left to spawn we grow restless.
Our new drive is self rightness and the will to move forward
While erasing everything behind we build and fill never seeing the truth
We are full and we are burying the poor in the waste
Still we search for glory and the truth thats faded always moving towards
Question all and never leave anyone behind
This is a dawn of a equal world no more one sidedness
How as man can we love when we dont understand the nature?
Is that our fault or is that the nature of our crime?
So shall we let our world spread the disease?
Or is it time we find a cure?
A united voice and hands crossed tighter brother with sister
Or should we all just pack and all just leave?
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Re: pack and all just leave?
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 4th September 2007 @ 01:37:56 PM AEST
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Wilder,
Good write. I loved this line...
"A united voice and hands crossed tighter brother with sister"
Holding hands, sticking together, fighting like hell for our beliefs, that my friend is definitely the wise thing to do. Once again you have touched on your strong convictions to earth and it's inhabitants.
Right on, brother.
Peace, love and hugs,
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Re: pack and all just leave?
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 06:25:03 AM AEST
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| very intrigueing write...leaves me thinking...nicely done.....my brain hurts...lol. thanks for posting. |
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