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Star Shine
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Tuesday, 4th September 2007 @ 01:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Night time
The darkness
seems to flow
in gentle waves
Clothes hanging
out on the line
Late evening wash
Stars out
Silver specks of light
shining brightly
Gentle breeze
stirs the country calm
The fabric softener smell
wafts through
the night time air
So quiet
So peaceful
and comforting
I turn my head skywards
and simply soak in the
star shine
9-2-07
Laura Howell Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2007-09-04 13:27:19]
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Re: Star Shine
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 06:05:07 AM AEST
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| such a descriptive write. i can see this very comforting moment....absolutely beautiful. thank you for posting. |
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Re: Star Shine
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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this is sooo dreamy and brillinat, love the last line it kind of hits you and soaks you in the gentleness of night..
well don!!!
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Re: Star Shine
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 11:37:17 PM AEST
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To take in the beauty of what is around us, is the inner peace we can find in being at one with ourselves. What a wonderful way to spend one moment....enjoying life.
To more of those moments and more of these writes.
Hugs little sister. |
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