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Keep Your Secrets #3 (aquatic!?)
Contributed by
droughp
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Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Empty aquariums of sunken dreams,
Gills sewn shut and things that scream,
Flesh-eating fish, bacteria and concrete,
Keep your secrets, concrete feet,
Cry bitter tears into the sallow sea,
Keep your secrets, drink my fury.
Copyright ©
droughp
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2007-09-07 15:13:34]
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Re: Keep Your Secrets #3 (aquatic!?)
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by shelby on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:43:19 PM AEST
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This is right down toothy, short but so heavy and deep.
Good write
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Re: Keep Your Secrets #3 (aquatic!?)
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by endlesspath on
Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 11:45:21 AM AEST
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sounds secretly.....but very very deep; maybe mad at ones self as well as another.......WOW. liked the whole mystery of the power
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