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LIVE IT
Contributed by
bruce
on
Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 11:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Live It
Live your life, every last minute
never giving in
don't be there as a loser
only there to win
You have always been there fighting
now is not the time to change
Just the mere thought of this
to you, would be very strange
Think only positive
as you always do
Negativity, in your way of thinking
is something, you never knew
Your life is very precious
and you must Live It, every day
Make yourself stronger
In every possible way
Whatever it takes to get back to yourself
is just, what must be done
Start by being able to walk again
then soon being able to run
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-09-11 23:38:32]
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Re: LIVE IT
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and awesome truths.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVE IT
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 04:13:59 PM AEST
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Glad to see you here and hope you are feeling better. A beautiful write with a strong message.. Glad I took a moment to stop by, I rarely visit here anymore.
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Re: LIVE IT
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 05:05:58 AM AEST
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You have a great message here!
Maybe change "totally" in the second stanza to "so" or something like that, it stumbles a bit.
Otherwise well done! |
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