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Breathing Our Memory.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:30:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Breathing our memory...
Breathing gently against you,
Breathing gently against me...
The grave can't keep us apart
A million pieces of my hollow bones
But what will always remain is my heart
Something truly unbreakable
Undeniable, and unmistakable
For all in which it beats for
As I lay in my grave my love still stands
I am merely ashes in the wind
But my heart still sits in your hands
Let it beat, let it thrive
I am a ghost amongst the dead
But my love for you is still alive
Remembering the days I could feel your embrace
When my fingers would slide across the side of your face
Now I see the sadness in your eyes, so empty and alone
And I watch your tears hit the grass
As you lay beside my head stone
And you can't see me, but I know you feel me
Breathing gently against you,
Breathing gently against me...
Breathing our memory.
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Re: Breathing Our Memory.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 05:05:58 AM AEST
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wonderful write. very sad. you conveyed the emotions wonderfully. keep up the good work.
keep writing
keep smiling |
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Re: Breathing Our Memory.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 06:08:54 AM AEST
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A truely sad and heartfelt write from a unique perspective.
Great job on the rhymes and the wrap up. |
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