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Serpentine, Serpentine
Contributed by
adreana
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Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 02:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Serpentine, Serpentine
Tempting me with your words
Of seduction and sedation
Luring me into deception
My legs are steadfast
My heart is bold and armored
My head is saying no!
And so I shall remain
If my tales could be told
On one single night
I would tell you why I won't
Follow you into oblivion
I have seen too many
With your eyes and tongue
Who have hurt my body of bones
I cannot ever turn back
Slither away, Shadow Snake
Take your evil with you
I've got enough in my soul
To last a thousand lifetimes
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adreana
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Re: Serpentine, Serpentine
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 10:10:24 PM AEST
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Oh this was deliciously dark. It rolled off my tongue so easily whilst reading. That ending stanza was just super.
"I've got enough in my soul
To last a thousand lifetimes"
Great lines there...Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Serpentine, Serpentine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th September 2007 @ 05:52:39 AM AEST
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Very bold and intence. Nice work form the dark side . . .
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Re: Serpentine, Serpentine
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by Spike on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 08:13:30 PM AEST
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Interesting and confident take on resisting dark enticements.Thank goodness for learning from experience, but it still tests the resolve, doesn't it.
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