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What Have you Seen? Where Have you Been?
Contributed by
ed
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life can be perfect
Then not worth it.
Contentment builds up,
Hate breaks it up.
People are so cruel and so kind.
Everyday complicates itself more.
You are Gods whore,
Leased to endure what comes along:
Love and Hate,
Happiness and sorrow,
What will become of tomorrow?
Black, White or in between?
Whatever happens you will die.
What have you seen?
Where have you been?
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2003-03-04 20:40:00]
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Re: What Have you Seen? Where Have you Been?
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 02:49:05 AM AEST
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Ed, They get better as I read on, this seems to achieve very well the sad soulfull despair
of the child that says "I'm bored......."
One can be the opposite (like me) constantly over passionate about one thing after another to the exclusion of all else..
What no commercial? I'll have to write a poem on the subject................it would take too long to answer your questions here.
On again...... |
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Re: What Have you Seen? Where Have you Been?
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:37:53 PM AEST
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| ooh... good write.. i love this.. |
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