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I think I dream of You
Contributed by
funnyface09
on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 12:04:26 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Dark clouds above my head
The rain is coming our way
I am searching for you
Before the darkness comes and surrounds me
I tried to shout but no voice came out
Longing for your touch
Longing for the smell of your skin
I continue to walk on
From afar I saw you
Or I thought it was you
I ran towards you
Only to find is only air I am grabbing
I fell down on my knees
Crying, I dont know what to do
It has already started to rain
I closed my eyes
Opening to find myself surrounded by the coldness of the wall
I hugged my pillow closer
And I think I can smell your scent
Before I float myself into dreamland, yet again.
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Re: I think I dream of You
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by shelby on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 03:43:35 AM AEST
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This is lovely, I could feel the longing within the words.
It reaches out and grabs the reader.
I soooooo relate to this !
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Re: I think I dream of You
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 02:29:45 PM AEST
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| Your crying out and yearning for this person is clear.An emotional and well expressed write! |
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