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Where Do Hearts Go?
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 04:57:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like an abandoned soul
Wandering and lonely
Lost and cast out
From words behind them.
With a single good-bye
Slicing and imprinting
Deceitful and betrayed
From their heartfelt mistakes.
Where do hearts go?
When there's no one to guide them.
Where do hearts go?
When there's no one beside them.
Like a forbidden kiss
Romantic and sweet
Dangerous and risking
From its sensual allure.
Bid them farewell
Pretending and convincing
Penetrating and loving
From their forget less dreams.
Where do hearts go?
When there's no one leading the way.
Where do hearts go?
When there's no one saving the day.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2007-09-18 04:57:06]
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Re: Where Do Hearts Go?
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by AnenaLynne on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 08:12:16 AM AEST
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simply beautiful! every word was on point and they fit and played off of each other so well..very enjoable read...absolutly fabulous job!
~nena |
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Re: Where Do Hearts Go?
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by madhusudan on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 10:51:51 PM AEST
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| what a wonderful poem...the words where do hearts go..is so touching and beautiful and so painful....wow...please write more... |
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Re: Where Do Hearts Go?
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by Saruchan on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 04:11:08 AM AEST
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| if you ever find out the answer, please let me know! great write, very moving. Thanks for posting it. |
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