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Driven Thoughts
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 02:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Thoughts....of you
seem to swirl through my head
leaving me with distorted visions
and so much indecision
Time seems to go so fast
but yet lingers like a winter's snow
Caught in this warped space
Never imagining you'd ever go
Torn between dreams and wishes
Hopes of a future, finally kind
Life turns to living nightmares
A true love, I could not find
Thoughts that torture an already
warped and medicated brain
Illness of sorts, you might say
that never lets me forget the pains
So far lost in a forest, ever dark
Canopy hides the sun and stars
Journeys like this, I often take
Driving all day, never starting the car.....
9/16/07
Laura Howell Horner
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2007-09-18 14:13:34]
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Re: Driven Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 10:19:03 PM AEST
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Poetry of the higest caliber as always. Most
lovely a peice.
((((peace2usister laura))))
Ben
ty also 4 your comment
bjps |
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Re: Driven Thoughts
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by madhusudan on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 10:49:39 PM AEST
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| There is something about this poem...i dont know why..but the image of the car completes the poem...fits in perfectly...life can be lonely at times...and this poem perfectly enacts that time... |
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Re: Driven Thoughts
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 06:09:40 AM AEST
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| wow..thats a powerful peice...the description of that particular ..."haze" i guess you could call it..a haze i relate to so well..these feelings of pain, and being lost...just...amazing...it's like the saying "standing on the outside looking in." ...my favorate line is deffinantly the ending ..."driving all day, never starting the car...." ...wow...very powerful line there..i totaly relate to this write. fantastic job. |
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