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I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
Contributed by
Percursors
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Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Dont u hate it when
all ur life plans disappear
in the blink of and eye
if anyone even blinks
if anyone even cares
cares as much as I do
the still of the room is killing me
I laugh though I cry on the inside
wanting to kill
feeling relived
all at the same time
wish I knew how I felt
is it all a make believe dream
that Ive been toying with all these years
Im young and full of dreams
ones that arnt make believe
but the one thing that could make me whole is simply outta reach
why are my arms always to short
why can I never run fast enough to catch up to anyone
why am I always the left out one
I hate being the last to know
how ur feeling
trying to find out how I feel
just dont lie to me or
betray me
lead me to believe ur not who ur saying
just tell me
dont lie
I wont hate u
even though Ill cry
but dont cry with me
I wouldnt want you to waste ur tears on something stupid like me
and my life dreams
that u didnt destroy
just set back and thats fine
with u we were going no where slow
but I was happy cuz we werent standing still
but u cant possibly understand
what happens in my mind
and I dont expect you to
just try
cry
sympathize
just to spit it out like its no big deal!
I cant imagine being u
in later years when u see me
never think what if
cuz its to late 4 u to care
cuz I no longer do
u had ur chance
forget it now
I almost hate u
but I feel released with ur confession
I hate that I love u cuz now Ill never see u
maybe thats the problem
losing u
but I doubt I will
but Im always wrong
the worst that could happen is ur dreams would be gone
well now that they have u ask me how I feel
I feel like *****
but Im not worried
no more than I was
so stereotypical
so lost
Im the only one pulling for me
Im tired of having only me
only me to believe in me
I need some support from anyone
anyone to share my dream
theres nothing like the feeling of doubt
theres nothing worst then killing yourself
but still I try
I try so hard
I wish I knew u
u lied to me when u told me u were u
when I knew in my heart u werent who u are
but Im still not mad, just disappointed
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Percursors
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Re: I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:41:44 AM AEST
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Thats how I feel about my life. Great write!
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Re: I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
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by Spirit_Dancer on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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Sounds so sad, and hurtful.. I hope it gets better soon..sending a hug in case you need one!
Spirit_Dancer....:) |
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Re: I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
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by sunflower on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:45:16 PM AEST
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| stay with your gut feelings, create good out of pain with your truthful poetry |
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Re: I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
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by hardcoreputa on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 01:24:12 AM AEST
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| great write.. i am speechless.... |
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Re: I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
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by Chaos666 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:14:48 PM AEST
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It's awesome when so much truth is spoken in so few words....I've been feeling those same feelings for a while.....just keep being honest in your writing and it will only get better and provide excellent therapy as well!!!
Awesome piece!! |
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Re: I’m Not Mad, Just Disappointed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:45:57 PM AEST
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this poem was a really good write... I hope that you will also read mine and tell me what you think... I will see you soon
~*SHORT GURL*~
also known as Jamie |
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