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The Last Day
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Thursday, 20th September 2007 @ 12:45:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Everyday is worse and worse
You hate me now
I'm your curse.
The last time you'll ever make me cry
I'm done with this, I don"t know why
I put up with you for so long
No more, say goodbye, I'm gone.
Leaving you alone to your pain
You won't hurt me anymore
just for your gain.
You'll be sorry
for what you did to me
I'm at the edge now
I'll make you see.
A fatal pain
I've inflicted,
As my life wanes
my spirits are lifted.
My love and concern are gone.
The pain increases
I just let go.
You've caused me
so much pain,
Though you'll never know.
Copyright ©
flamingblade
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2007-09-20 12:45:13]
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Re: The Last Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 01:11:36 AM AEST
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Thishas so much fury in it while accompanied by such a calm and
focused follow through style of one's
own hurting testament. Very nice
approach to all of your writting . . .
Ben
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