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A mornings word 092107
Contributed by
wordsy
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Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 10:19:11 PM in AEST
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Nothing is all life gave you
And nothing is never a lot
Its nothing but a case of give and take
When its taken all youve got
Nothing is the matter
And nothings going to go wrong
Nothing more to worry about
And nothing takes too long
Nothing here to see my friend
When nothing you believe is true
Nothing more for you to say
When theres nothing you can do
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wordsy
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2007-09-21 22:19:11]
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Re: A mornings word 092107
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:21:33 AM AEST
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Nothing but the best i`ve read in a long time.
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Re: A mornings word 092107
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by Dom on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 09:45:55 PM AEST
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The phrasing of this gives it a clever sing-song feel that makes it seem almost mocking if it wasn't for the desperately sad final stanza. Masterfully crafted!
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