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Incarcerated
Contributed by
reprobate
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Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:38:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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So true, the saw of parting is such a sorrow
No joy in seperation where longing was born
Unwilling and circumspect finds aching breast
Mind and heart doubt the veracity of sweet
Agonies wrought in future emptiness too real
The sick hollow masks the eyes from all color
Everything grows cold, gray and almost lifeless
I dare you to enlighten, where is the sweetness
All too soon, nothing is to be found but cloying palor
Shells of afterthought wishes, sad rememberances
Dreaming perhaps there may be the hope of return
Glimmers of renewed embrace provide saccarine escape
Will the desire for revival of pleasant reveries negate
Are tired shadows scattered with wistful aspirations
Credibility seems contrived while consumed by flagging faith
Moments of honey imprisoned within departure's dungeon
Copyright ©
reprobate
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2007-09-22 04:38:33]
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Re: Incarcerated
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 05:11:11 AM AEST
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Nice wordplay!
I especially love that last line! |
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Re: Incarcerated
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 02:10:08 PM AEST
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Hmmm You played these words well, my friend. Sadness, bittersweet sadness filled me whilst reading this incredible write. The third stanza I found very moving. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Incarcerated
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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Well just keep on playing 'cause this is great.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Incarcerated
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by lukiest1 on
Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 02:27:29 AM AEST
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| u hav a vry nyce way w/ wordz & i absolootly luvb ur stuff, keep up da gr8 werk |
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Re: Incarcerated
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by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on
Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 03:08:56 PM AEST
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HAD TO LOOK UP CLOYING PALOR BUT AFTER THAT I LIKED IT
SCOTT
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Re: Incarcerated
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 12:29:34 PM AEST
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wow! truly a masterpiece here, it is perfectly
penned, the depth beautiful, you never fail my
friend, your poem as all your poetry flows, this
one shines:)
hugs n' love nessa
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