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Sandcastles And Sea-Shells.
Contributed by
TeamJK
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Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 12:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You build sand castles on the beach
These are your hope and dreams
You watch them being washed away
When the tides come in.
This makes you so very sad
But still you go on building.
Hoping and dreaming that one day
The tides wont wash your dream house away.
This is your life at present.
I prefer to collect sea-shells,
Shells that I can treasure forever..
Although each one brings a special joy to me
The cherished ones I keep close at hand..
And ever so often, I take out those other shells,
Hold them tightly in my hand,
And recall where and when I found them..
And I smile when I remember the joy that each one brought to me.
This is my life at present.
May 22, 2003
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TeamJK
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2007-09-23 12:57:49]
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Re: Sandcastles And Sea-Shells.
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 01:27:43 PM AEST
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Gosh I missed your work.
Awesome writing as ever.
Big huggs,
emy
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Re: Sandcastles And Sea-Shells.
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by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on
Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 02:08:10 PM AEST
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I DON'T KNOW IF YOU MENT THIS TO BE A METOFORE (SPELLING SUX LOL) BUT I READ IT AS ONE AND I CAN RELATE TO THE WANTING OF BUILDING SOMETHING THAT WILL LAST BUT AS FOR BRINGING OUT MY OLD SEA SHELLS OUT OF THE CLOSET I AM BEST IF THE SHELLS STAY WHERE THEY ARE LOL
I LIKE IT EVEN IF I AM WRONG ON THE MEANING LOL
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Re: Sandcastles And Sea-Shells.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th September 2007 @ 04:35:52 AM AEST
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May your lives forever be filled with sandcastles and seashells. And it bring forth more lightheartedness as this poem does.
wabl
KenMoore
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