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River of Blood (edit)
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Tuesday, 25th September 2007 @ 10:39:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My heart is beating faster
with every strangled breath I take
blood is all around me
bathing in this crimson lake
A pool of all the lies
I hear their tortured screams
drowning in what's left behind
drink in the scarlet sea
eyes are blind and bleeding
staring at the broken sky
a perfect hell before me
all of this is mine.
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2007-09-25 10:39:16]
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Re: River of Blood (edit)
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 25th September 2007 @ 11:30:49 PM AEST
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nice. dark. just how we like them.
Good job.
i like the imagery.
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