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In Between the Lines
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 06:26:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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god
damn I'm freaking crazy
neurotic and sometimes lazy
I drip with black ooze
that flows from the cracks
Creature called woman
infused through my back
I hide in a web that I
made for myself
Gray and sticky walls
lines my hateful little nest
I breath and choke
tasting this air
Feeling like I could cut those
with my darkened eyes... if I dare
Touched by a shadow
I can't seem to shake
Heart and soul lying open
in the blinding sun...they bake
There is no more left
Nothing left to give
Spent and spun
Yeah, it's gone, baby
Drained through the sieve
6-29-07
Laura Howell Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2007-09-27 06:26:18]
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Re: In Between the Lines
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 01:47:16 PM AEST
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Wow, this murel of intence emotions gone awry i might add, may bring true epression to art but in time like fire that rages out of control shall only serve to consume you and
leave you in a state of such ambiguity as to
detract from those who love you and suffer
along with you. Hope for the best and turn to
your children for in time they to shall experience there own perrils, and shall turn to you . . .
Peace hugs and like wise love 2u and your family . . .
here's 2 a gentle healing my sister Laurs
your friend and brother.
Ben
ty also 4 your read and comment take care.
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Re: In Between the Lines
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 08:44:10 AM AEST
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wow totally expressive and emotional.. it all pours out in the words and its so powerful .. great job!!
rock on,
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Re: In Between the Lines
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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wow Laura sis you really let it out this time.
Hope your doing ok sis.
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Re: In Between the Lines
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 02:31:27 AM AEST
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Well,that certainly packed a punch,or should it be bite,a spider's bite.Well worth the post,I'd say.Creates very strong images for the reader.
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