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Scars That Should Never Be
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 05:33:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Conscience sleeps, drugged by material lust
The stench of greed pervades, smog chokes reason
Your grief just a mask, worn barely a day
Plans perfectly orchestrated, joined together in symphony of intent
The carrion of passing now all that remains
Vile apparitions shed humanity, come crawling to the feast
Shepherding self respect to the back of the mind
Dignity becomes the second thought, the sacrificial lamb
As I search for justice in the jigsaw of replayed scenes
Just ice I see in your cold impervious hearts
Your lies spit venom, spreading the infection of your tainted soul
Money your appointed god, poisoned by its power
Death from disease as greater disease lingers in you
Your thoughts not times past but times yet to come
For the one that was I would gladly forsake my share
You leave me cold and broken,with scars that should never be
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Re: Scars That Should Never Be
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by Adreana on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 07:51:01 AM AEST
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| Oooooooo... I could really feel the tension in this piece. 'Tis a pity that people with such greed in their hearts walk among us. Well expressed, friend. ~Adreana |
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Re: Scars That Should Never Be
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by isis1987 on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 06:58:04 PM AEST
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| WOW. its easy to see where your coming from. its a pity money has such a power and influence over so many people at least your heart is in the right place. good write. |
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Re: Scars That Should Never Be
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 01:51:01 AM AEST
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that is tough, and the worst part of it is... these people are family. i don't envy you, not at all. you displayed your emotions, and disgust well without going over the top. i like that. nicely written. hope it all gets done with soon so those people can go crawl back into their holes.
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