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To Me He is the Sun
Contributed by
Saruchan
on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 06:59:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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His eyes,
Drinking in my soul,
Smile kindly,
Touching deeply my heart,
Listening softly,
His voice speaking gently,
Flowing slowly,
As water down the brook,
And twirls past,
His hand,
Moving passionately,
Laugh tenderly,
Stirring power within,
Watching carefully,
His spirit flys freely,
Raising smoothly,
As the dawn breaks,
Creamy colors seeping speared,
He sees me like air,
Remembers not my words,
But to me he is as the sun,
The effortless only one.
Copyright ©
Saruchan
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2007-09-28 06:59:50]
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Re: To Me He is the Sun
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 08:51:18 AM AEST
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this is a nice flowing work of art.. i loved the ending especially.. this has an eloquent flow to it.
awesome job
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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