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Don't Let Autumn Come
Contributed by
adreana
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Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 07:19:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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He is the tree and I am his leaves
Through stormy weather, he's my only reprieve
His branches hold my green soul up
Letting love overflow in my cup
That heavy wind can soil the sun
But dear old Weatherman,
Don't let Autumn come.
My colors changed since Spring gave bloom
My face is turning shades of peach and maroon
His strength is tiring, his eyes falling
A change of heart is coldly calling
That heavy wind can soil the sun
But dear old Weatherman,
Don't let Autumn come.
One last breath, I'm begging and pleading
As pieces of me fall to the ground, bleeding
He's going dormant, perhaps love was too much
Making him too hard for these leaves to touch
That heavy wind can soil the sun
But dear old Weatherman,
Don't let Autumn come
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adreana
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2007-09-28 07:19:39]
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Re: Don't Let Autumn Come
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 07:22:04 AM AEST
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Nice write, a very enchanting and hypnotic piece that flows beautifully.
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Re: Don't Let Autumn Come
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by CloakedMystery on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 06:04:23 AM AEST
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such a beautiful poem
i really like it..
thanks 4 the good read! |
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Re: Don't Let Autumn Come
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 12:05:49 PM AEST
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I like it!!
Very original.
Also don't forget come spring....you bloom again.... |
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Re: Don't Let Autumn Come
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th October 2007 @ 03:26:31 AM AEST
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What a beautiful peice of writting, so heart
warming most vivid and fragile, realy nice.
Ben
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