|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
MOTIONS OF LIFE
Contributed by
isis1987
on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 06:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
you hate you love
you push you shove
you know no peace
your never at ease
anger builds you fall
you envy the tall
you bark you bite
you scream you fight
you kick you hit
you throw a fit
you live you die
your lives a lie
your strong but weak
'justice' you seek
you laugh you cry
you know just why
your stubborn your bold
your warm but cold
you have been told
you soon will fold
you deny the blame
your lifes in shame
the guilts on you
what to do?
you make the choice
you've got a voice
you lisyen now speak
be strong not weak
your up your down
you smile you frown
you make a mistake
your forgiven its fate
be thruthfull dont lie
or your soul will die
dont be angry dont hate
dont mess up your own fate
you let go you forgive
your life you live
the anger will seace
you will feel the peace
Copyright ©
isis1987
... [
2007-09-28 18:38:34]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: MOTIONS OF LIFE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 08:08:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nice work.Too many people are looking back when they should be looking forward and then miss opportunities.
You have to let go of the past, it's done
Steve |
|
|
Re: MOTIONS OF LIFE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 05:27:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very well expressed for a 15 year old. A poem of truths... and some good life advice. Bravo!
~Adreana |
|
|
Re: MOTIONS OF LIFE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 03:59:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
it was kinda hard but I got the gist
liked how it rhymed
peace |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
