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All The Things I Couldn't Say
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 06:30:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I'm sorry for
All the things I couldn't say
Laughing at your dismay
Locking you away
Slowly drifting astray.
Not letting you explain
Not letting you maintain
Making you feel so lame
Manipulating all this pain.
I'm sorry you
Couldn't give me space
Couldn't find your place
Walked in a meaningless pace
Left your life a waste.
Called my bluff
Kept all that stuff
Let it get so rough
Had enough.
But most of all
I'm sorry for
All the things I couldn't say.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2007-09-29 18:30:44]
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Re: All The Things I Couldn't Say
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 02:52:41 AM AEST
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this is nicely done. It has a fast pace and great use of rhyme. I enjoyed reading it.
God bless. |
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Re: All The Things I Couldn't Say
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 04:30:23 PM AEST
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sometimes somethings are best kept left unsaid...
thanks for sharing... |
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