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LoveLand
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 09:50:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There is a pause
in the rift
and I feel the heat
of pleasure
yesss
love is still alive.
The essence of love
enhancing a romantic scene
it's sensational
so emotional
that it's hard to describe
all the pleasures....
of this
slow ride.
Liquid movements in a mist
a moan and a kiss
I tremble
in a moment of pure bliss...
the eyes in my head
go
round and round.
Ahhhhh
I am
adrift on a wave
passions crescendo
as loves tsunami overwhelms me,
oh so slowly
I am
melting now.
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unknown_utopia
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2007-09-29 21:50:40]
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Re: LoveLand
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 11:46:03 AM AEST
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aaaaah yea handsome,
I'm melting with you.
Awesome melting process.
luv ya,
emy |
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Re: LoveLand
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 04:23:30 PM AEST
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whoever you write this to will melt when they read it...
thanks for sharing |
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