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One Last Drink
Contributed by
grode
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Monday, 1st October 2007 @ 09:56:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The cool night air soothes my restless soul,
Why'll the rhythm of passing cars,
Is the melody my ears can not resist,
I drink not to gain inebriation,
But because it provides me reverse motivation,
The world has stopped as I control movement,
Life keeps wanting but I find little need,
I see the light in the distance but shield my eyes,
Will tomorrow fulfill dreams of mornings past?
Or will it disappoint like a present-less Christmas,
I may be the editor,
But this pen lacks ink,
Cornered by loneliness,
I find only time to think,
That is reason enough to pour one last drink,
Copyright ©
grode
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2007-10-01 09:56:30]
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Re: One Last Drink
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by brew on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 11:29:40 AM AEST
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May I say: I feel exactly what you have penned in ink....You have released all with drinking, hoping one will forget and not know what is in store.......
Wonderful write
Your words flow
Lonliness appears..Yup
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