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my ailmentz & woez
Contributed by
lukiest1
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Tuesday, 2nd October 2007 @ 02:14:40 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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beybe, u r da cure 2 all my ailmentz & my woez
letz sell my award-winin pomez & buy a houze w/ a milloin stairz.
letz take terns kikin each other down,
& den letz lie in da centor of da erth holdin handz, meltin, in a pudle of boilin blood.
lotz o pplz say my pomez r no good
but wut doez dey know?
i'm bout 2 blo up da beztseler chartz
cuz i hav a muse dat iz my beybe.
ring round da rosey
poket full of beybes.
ashes ashes
all fall down...da stares.
i luv u beybe <3
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Re: my ailmentz & woez
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