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All Eyes Down On Me
Contributed by
tina35
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Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 04:26:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Heart pounding feeling nervous then all of a sudden its hard to breathe,
why must I feel like all eyes are down on me?
Thoughts are spinning feircly in my head like a tornado leaving nothing but the dead.
Feeling so lost and confused while everyone seems so amused.
Trying to get back on my feet I start to struggle,but only to survive in this crazy jungle.
No one seems to care but yet they still seem to stare .
Locked in their stares never to be free . Always to have all eyes down on me..........
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tina35
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2007-10-03 04:26:06]
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Re: All Eyes Down On Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 05:33:14 AM AEST
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I know how it feels to be judged. I'm a little different then most. Some call me a hippie, some a deadhead, some a freak, some say I'm just plain weird...Doesn't matter to me, wouldn't want to be like those critical, judgmental folks. Good write, good rhythm and flow.
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Re: All Eyes Down On Me
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by brew on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 11:05:25 AM AEST
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Agreed with Laura, She rocks....no matter WHAT any one thinks..your a human, and person.so who cares what one thinks, Im in sane, and love a nerd.....so there you go..its what One sees and :not all
Stand tall and walk proud
You are beautiful...no matter.
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Re: All Eyes Down On Me
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by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 01:27:34 PM AEST
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ALL EYES MIGHT BE ON YOU BUT ONLY THE BLIND CAN ACTUALLY SEE PEOPLE NEED TO CLOSE THIER EYES AND OPEN THIER HEARTS
SCOTT |
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