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An evenings plunder
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There is no end
that I can see
To the shadows in life
that fall on me
And there is no place
that I can hide
From all this pain
that there is inside
And of all the dreams
long faded now
and all the things
in life gone foul
And all the truths
I held so dear
have fallen asunder
the growing fear
of the changing tides
of time and fate
in a world so full
of rage filled hate
Copyright ©
wordsy
... [
2003-03-05 14:00:00]
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:18:34 PM AEST
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| Very well written wordsy ... I enjoyed this very much. |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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| True, true...Great write... |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:40:38 PM AEST
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| hmm..kind of wistful about one's life 'til i got to the end...then it seemed so much deeper and about the world.......huggs always nessa |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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| A lot of dark feelings in this that could reflect on alot of us! Good write! Christina |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by venkat on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 01:13:44 AM AEST
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| wonderful write and meaningful title..sun sets in the evening .but he rises on the next day morning.. Thank you for sharing a beautiful dark poem. venkat |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 10:47:09 AM AEST
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How...in so few and simple words...do you manage to convey such deep feelings?
You're talent runs deep as do your thoughts my friend. Bar keeper!!!! Fix my pal here up with a drink...he deserves it. |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:37:14 AM AEST
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| great write, as always your poetry stands out |
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Re: An evenings plunder
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 11:10:37 AM AEST
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| excellent write, hugs nessa |
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