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Euphony of a Tuneless Song
Contributed by
lost_chadow
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Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 08:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Bald-headed redneck
In a jacket of dirty specks
Sticks out among the crows in their rows
A gang of pests gone unchecked
Im the redneck, outcast elect
Best known for my bare head and long neck
The black-feathered messengers of Hades hate me
So Im crushed on the lowest branches beneath the rest
But the pressure just makes me stronger than the best
Giant wings like whirlwinds put mountains to the test
Strong enough to kill, but too smart to fight
Instead I alight at ready-made meals to jest the dead
While that mutinous gaggle babbles at each others behest
Inside my own mind, almost comically, I just rest
So while haughty hawks like Hughes may rule the top
The buzzard at the bottom is truly best.
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2007-10-05 08:02:52]
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Re: Euphony of a Tuneless Song
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by brew on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 09:23:08 AM AEST
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Well sometimes rednecks arent bad
yet if you talk all hick, then i have to say.yee haw......lol
Sorry Im a texan, so Im considered a redneck, but for from what MOST consider, one
Im born and raised country, yet do live in the city
would love land, and more, but....just something about some ppl and their talking.....lmao
cute write tho
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Re: Euphony of a Tuneless Song
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 12:55:21 PM AEST
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Very thoght provoking, well written write.
huggs,
emy |
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