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BEFORE NIGHT FALLS
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Another day is gone,
another night as fall
my feet are'nt getting smaller
I call for shade
I weep for crown
not to leave my head in the air
not to leave
though I came by his name
not to live by it
come quickly, the desire cock
come quickly
before night falls
olasunkanmi
kanmmy2@yahoo.com
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2003-03-05 17:00:00]
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Re: BEFORE NIGHT FALLS
(User Rating: 1 )
by ManowarManiac on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:15:34 PM AEST
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| Not bad, could use a little work, but all in all not a bad poem at all. |
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