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A Message To The Cold Hearted
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Tuesday, 9th October 2007 @ 05:46:13 PM in AEST
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I'm so tired of you
I know you feel it too.
How do you sleep at night?
With all that fright.
I can't believe you
Don't realize what you do.
You seem to have lost sight
Of reality so bright.
Apparently I'm the only one
Who sees the flaws you've done.
How do you stay so warm
When you're obviously so cold and worn?
I can't believe people don't shun
And block you from the world so fun.
You seem to swarm
Around people as not to mourn.
I hope you know
That you're not as smart as you show.
I hope I can make you see
That you're no better than he.
One day you'll have to go
And no one will be here when you glow.
When you die I hope you ask me
Why you could never be free.
You disgust me.
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Karlee14
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Re: A Message To The Cold Hearted
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 9th October 2007 @ 08:18:19 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. The ending is excellent. |
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Re: A Message To The Cold Hearted
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 01:47:17 AM AEST
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| Brilliant I think I know that person, well she is just the same will be old sad and lonely if she does not change xx |
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Re: A Message To The Cold Hearted
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by isis1987 on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 09:48:13 PM AEST
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| wow. its still very unclear of the situation of this person your talking about. to say that they are cold hearted im guessing she/he done something that hurt another and doesnt seem to care?!?! anyways im sure they are battling their own demons. |
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