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RAINY DAYS AND SUNSHINE
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Tuesday, 9th October 2007 @ 11:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Oh no not again,
imprisoned indoors because of rain,
pitter patter I like the sound,
as it bounces to the ground,
watching it slide down window panes ,
running in spirals to the drain,
overcast , clouds , no sign of sun,
puddles gliding to make one,
watching is all I can do,
as I think my life through,
time to sit, refect,to ponder,
will this ever stop I wonder,
then almost as soon as its begun,
the rain stops, out comes the sun,
almost in tune with my life,
happiness comes. replaces strife,
so nows the time to get out there,
enjoy the sun be free of care,
nothing ever stays the same,
so enjoy your life before it rains..
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2007-10-09 23:12:52]
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Re: RAINY DAYS AND SUNSHINE
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by Adreana on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 12:06:14 AM AEST
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I really love the word choices you made in this one. The metaphor is wonderful!! Love it love it love it!! Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more!
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Re: RAINY DAYS AND SUNSHINE
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 12:21:38 PM AEST
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Very good work of art, my friend.
Awesome truths in these words.
huggs, smiles,
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