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But still
Contributed by
jackson21
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Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 05:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Should I let go of you once and for all,
Should I forget all my emotions and how we were,
Should I listen to you as you say your trying to do whats right,
Should I pretend I'm happy here without you.
I'm upset because I miss everything about you,
I'm upset for what I have done,
I'm upset at why that ring still sits on your mantle piece,
I'm upset that you threw it all away.
So why should I listen as you say you just wish to see me happy,
So why do I still sit here hoping things will change,
So why do I still cry myself to sleep at night,
So why do you say things like I'm a challenge.
Is it because I feel so numb,
Is it because I feel empty now that your gone,
Is it because when your drunk you say i miss you,
Is it because I hope that when you say it you actually mean it.
I find it hard to let go of you,
I find it hard to pretend I'm happy with fake smiles,
I find it hard to stop thinking about you everyday,
I find it hard when you just smile and turn away.
I know that I just want you to be happy,
I know that your happiness doesn't involve me,
I know that if you came back I wouldn't be happy,
Because I know it wasn't real because you really dont love me.
But still I sit here and miss you,
But still I pine for you like a tool,
But still I remain sitting here hoping,
But still I'm just a love sick fool.
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2007-10-10 17:19:02]
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Re: But still
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by Adreana on
Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 12:38:56 AM AEST
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| I like the repetition in this one. Very effective. Very well written. Hope it helped you, writing is all out! :) ~ Adreana |
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Re: But still
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by -Nik-91- on
Saturday, 13th October 2007 @ 12:31:19 AM AEST
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| i know what its like to miss some one like you do now i hav this jacket and i used to sleep with it under my pillow cause it reminds me of him but he hurt me more tha n any other guy could ever and i hate him for that i hate him but deep down i love hime you know you will always love him you just learn to live without him if you need some one to talk to about then msg me n ill give u my addy cause i understand i really do love your poem btw |
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