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One World Cafe
Contributed by
crystalWinters
on
Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 06:15:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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English Breakfast Black tea colliding
With a cloud of sugar and milk
Friends in eachother confiding
As coffee goes down like silk
Amaretto biscotti crumbling
As emotions and conversations are bubbling
Black raspberry cheesecake devine
Eyes stray and minds wander
Upon the art shrine
Bringing people closer
A neon ring on the wall, doors hanging above
Stairs leading to an overlook
In this little coffee shop of love
Sitting in a cozy little nook
I feel at home as I glance out the window
The street's all aglow
There's no sign of sorrow
For it can wait until tomorrow
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crystalWinters
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Re: One World Cafe
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 10:17:38 PM AEST
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That was a nice read, I was loving it....some tasty treats....yummy. It all sounds lovely, thank you for sharing.
Peace,
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Re: One World Cafe
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 11:24:05 PM AEST
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1st off, I love your tittles, you could write a book just using those, and now this phrase,
" In this little coffee shop of love
Sitting in a cozy little nook
I feel at home as I glance out the window
The street's all aglow
There's no sign of sorrow
For it can wait until tomorrow "
Simply magnificent, so quaint, reminded me
of my home town New England. Not to mention also made me hungry with all of your vivid descriptions lol. Lovely, just lovely.
Ben
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Re: One World Cafe
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 09:32:02 AM AEST
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Ah yes, that rings some bells! I've a place or two of like nature.
Sounds like a great place; and artfully described.
Andrew |
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Re: One World Cafe
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by Saruchan on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 09:18:03 AM AEST
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| wow how wonderful! great write! made me fell warm inside! :) |
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Re: One World Cafe
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:23:40 AM AEST
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yummy poem! beautifully whistfully written:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: One World Cafe
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 08:21:50 AM AEST
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This was beautiful. Yes, we all have our places like this, but you've captured quite well the feeling of... home. Well written.
Take care,
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