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Breathe
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 05:34:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I can't breathe
The things I want to say to you
But the truth gets in the way
I'd apologize if I knew what to say
One more minute
And I'll erase all my memories
I guess I wanted a partner
Not a lover
Your heart smothers me
And I can't breathe.
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Karlee14
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2007-10-12 17:34:12]
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Re: Breathe
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 11:56:49 PM AEST
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Hmm. I can relate and I love the brevity of your write. This came together well, I almost felt breathless whilst reading. Very hard hitting. Good write.
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