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The First Lesson
Contributed by
maskfulgraces
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Saturday, 13th October 2007 @ 12:12:46 PM in AEST
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Without love, without pleasure, without danger, without pain
Animated movements are elaborated inadequately without feeling
Construct me a fortress within these passages
Spread these corruptions into contortioned nonsense
Make of them what you may
Understand them and forget with all the others of your days
Present yourself without fault
Show the lesser of your gallantry, feeding them only abstractions of their ignorance
Let them know you are the master
And that they must bow
You are your leader, as well as theirs
Place the crown of defeat upon your head
And be of the mentally grown
Remember they are yours
And yours alone
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Re: The First Lesson
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by Lucid_Tides on
Saturday, 13th October 2007 @ 05:48:35 PM AEST
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As much as I do love the way this was put together. I can't help but feel it is about training a dog, Or creating something. The words used are very well put together. I can't wait to read more.
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