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The Beholder
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
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Saturday, 13th October 2007 @ 05:41:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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We work so hard
fighting for our dreams
When the world begins to crumble
We work harder, it seems
Sometimes I feel it's pointless
Some things my mind can't bare
I've fought too hard to lose it all
I've given too much not to care
They bring you down with critical words
Maybe to see you fail
Criticism is a helpful key
That will help you set asail
So Keep an open mind
And finally plant the seed
Watch your world begin to grow
And you'll find you will succeed
If you find yourself with a weary mind
Look past the depressing thought
Leave the past far behind
Your future can not be bought
This life was given to you
Not to be pushed aside
Look unto the ones around you
And feel a sense of pride
Don't feel unfortunate
If you work harder for your dream
Knowledge is experience
And the wiser you shall be
So keep your eyes open
And keep on walking straight
Your future is becoming clear
You're the beholder of your fate
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Re: The Beholder
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by brew on
Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 11:37:19 AM AEST
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so basically we take the right path and not lefft
it helps choose our hopes and what ever is there for us.
I did like this, it hits my inner from a stand point..Good write
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